Wednesday, November 3, 2010

Blog #13:Research Plan


RESEARCH PLAN
FOCUS
·         How a session begins taking place, how the material is introduced between the tutor and writer.

QUESTIONS
1.       How does the very first minute of the session take place?
2.      How are the two strangers introduced to each other?
a.      What is the setting here? What is the atmosphere like between the tutor and writer, is there an immediate wall demonstrated or
3.      How does the tutor familiarize him/herself with the piece that’s brought in
a.      does the student explain what the piece is about
b.      does the student send the paper to the tutor before hand so the tutor will be familiar with the piece?
4.      Does the tutor ask questions?
a.      What is this piece about?
b.      What do you (the writer) expect to come out of this paper?
c.       Is this paper on focus?
d.      Are there any particular details your professor expects to have mastered for this paper?
e.      Do you have a formed thesis of this paper?
5.      Does the tutor take interest in what is being worked on?
a.      What actions are taken to show that s/he is intrigued? Describe.
b.      When advising on  how to re-word or better state that, does s/he do it out of spite?
                                   i.      Or does s/he take full interest in the piece being worked on?


List of information I need to gather:
·         Observations of how a session begins to take place
      o    What is the beginning energy?
§  Does that energy fall or rise?
     o    Is there excitement about the paper?
      o   Or is the paper introduced in a negtive mode?
·         How comfortable the atmosphere is between the tutor and writer.
·         The description of the material being worked on?
            o   Is it described in details?
            o   Is it broadly introduced and ripped apart as they go along  through the paper.
            o   Does the tutor ask the questions first with regards to the paper
                     §  Or does the writer describe his/her paper?




Tuesday, November 2, 2010

What to do for next class .. (information)

will be doing presentation on your research plans...
  • developing a research plan...
  • outline yourself- where you want to go ..
click on the link "Developing a research plan"
  • worksheet for developing a reasearch plan..
  • must come up with plan before you get into the project....
where to find some models..


Before you begin any project (funded/non-funded) there should always be a plan.  Before beginning any game, there should be some kind of strategy on how to beat the other team.  Before reaching the ideas in writing a successful, informational, and detailed paper with quotations (based on former text) there should always be a thesis, a main idea, etc.

Notes to help with finding Bibliography ..

Newkirk's: First Five Minutes - setting the agenda
getting involved with the work- stepping into the session being on the same level
As a tutor: must understand where the paper is going- understanding the writer's focus..
then could go into the subtitles (the details) of the paper so that their on the same page..
so the writer would never have to thing ("no, no no, you don't get it.. what I'm trying to say in my paper is ....")



·         Student was discouraged, the coaches interactions with the student and tutor…
·         Writer’s satisfaction... how attentive was the coach to the writer’s needs?
·         Looking for personal attention….
·         Coach was doing something on their own? Checking their cell phone..
·         Certain things coaches do when going through coaching

Topics for Karilyn:   
o   Tutor v. writer interaction
Jenn…
·         Coaches and tutors are dressed diversely bases their session
o   Clothing: laid back comfy- sweats.. interaction very laid back comfortable..
o   Business like dress- spoke very fast..
o   The way people dress affects their behavior ..
o   Visual analysis of clothing: psychology studies of clothing presence
Angela:
·         Needs to find methods on body language ..
o   Authorship in peer tutoring (who is more dominant in both sessions)
o   who takes control in the session
§  teacher centered student centering
§  teaching v tutoring
§  authority
§  power
§  ownership
§  control
§  authorship
§  gender
§  passive
§  submissive
·        

Blog 10: Note Taking Strategies

Going through my notes, I've realized that I've been focusing a lot on the topic and the questions being asked during the session. 
What interested me the most was what was the method in the tutor's coahing strategy? When does the work become familiar- how do you work on something you don't know?  What will be the main focus of the session?  Will the student & tutor focus on the main idea of the paper? the grammar of the paper? changing the focus of the paper? looking at the small details of the paper? 
I looked into the positioning of the tutor v the student- is there any form of comfort shown between the writer and the coach or does their positioning and behavior towards one another show a wall?  Does the communication betweent the two base off of their body language?

Blog 10: Writing Center Philosophy: (work in progress)

The Writing Center according to researcher Andrea Lunsford is an “information station or storehouse, prescribing and handing our skills and strategies to individual learners”.  Kean University’s Writing Center collaboration revolves around helping writers grow and confide in their work.  Tutoring sessions are based on one-on-one discussions enhancing mutual communication and consultation of the writers’ work.  Based on the social constructionist theory, the social language used within the session creates the communication between the tutor and writer. 
            The center is open to all students and faculty within the school.  We are made up of a diverse ream of students; our center is able to work with various writing skills, from the ELL (English language learner) students to the graduate level experienced writer. The hierarchy of our center consists of peer tutors(graduate and undergraduate), academic specialists and faculty within the English writing department.  The difference in staff is very useful in coaching and accomplishing all sorts of requirements needed out of the organized and the unorganized paper.
            Our tutors acquire our skills through practice with our peers/ classmates, exploring ideas and being open to elaborating on the details of papers.  Our center hopes to serve as an open minded and freely constructed tutoring center passing over our methods and expertise to individual graduate and undergraduate students.
            We encourage all writers who are searching for new techniques and tactics to visit our center.  The tutor and student work together  in planning out their papers to help with their focus and clarity.  Our mission is to help the everyday writer evolve in finding their own individual voice.  Writer’s block is an act that takes part of the everyday writer and is an action we are proud to take part in patiently exercising and defeating. The center bases their knowledge on previous education and experience.  Its mission is to succeed in accomplishing all the mysterious and unknown inquiries within a paper.  Each paper is placed on a blank palette and turns into a furnished painting. 
            The tutors are not necessarily made up of only English writers but must have the English language mastered.  The tutors study different majors within Kean University but are also powerful in their English writing and reading dexterity.  Through extensive training, the tutors are able to perfect their mission in the Writing Center to fulfill the student’s needs proficiently.

Thursday, October 7, 2010

Blog 9: What my Philosophy will look like.. (just a sketch)

Just some ideas:
  • Writing Center will be located withing a community College.  Didn't see too many signs of a writing center in my previous C.C.
  • Will be made for a diverse ream of students. (mainly for the students) but open to all.
  • Faculty will of course be very welcome to come in and help out and support the W.C.
  • I want to have my center be posted anywhere possible to bring as many students in as possible to show them that we are an organized community here to caress their writing problems and help solve any issues possible.
  • My wording will not be jargonny- As viewed in Michigan state, it is very intimidating, (I, now as a student feel as though they are too high class, and wouldn't be able to help me).  I will use common language but also of some sophistication to prove our writing center is based on proper writing.
  • The layout of my writing center will be very warm and welcoming. I imagine it to have a very similar style to a cafe, with comfortable seats (couches of some sort) and unique tables. Maybe even have a starbucks in it (why not, if it's all up to me).
  • The regulations and organization will be flexible but mostly disciplinary I will lay out a set of rules that will explain that we are in charge. We are not to be questioned on what we do. I want to show that we do have some sort of a hierarchy in the center, and not that each person gets to do a little bit of everything. There will be certain people signed up for certain tasks and we will stick to that.
  • I definitely appreciate the peer v. peer tutoring style therefore I will have my Center based on students in the classroom. I would really apreciate having a variety of students come in therefore I will have a variety of peers tutoring. Peers on different backgrounds and of different school levels (undergrads & grads).

Tuesday, October 5, 2010

Blog 8: Posting Draft

Bilingual students or ESL(English as a Second Language) students have it hard on them in the writing arena. ESL students are narrowed down into an entirely different writing culture than the native speaking students, causing them to seek for further help with different programs such as the writing center.  Although all students has different needs and expectations of their papers, ESL students have even greater in-depth difficulties that must be attained to before reaching their final writing aspirations.  Are writing centers fully equipped in aiding such obstacles?
Grammar has been practiced religiously back in elementary and middle school, while at the High School level, grammar was very seldomly practiced.  Grammar has been put aside and the main focus in writing has become the organization of the paper including getting the point across, finding the thesis statement and proving that point with supportive ideas.  Entering an intermediate writing class may be a struggle for students with another native language; although their speech may be clear enough, their language on paper may not.
The mainstream of the classroom is usually made up of English native speaking students.  Out of the 15,051 students enrolled in Kean University, only 282 students make up the international student body (Office of Institutional Research).  Therefore, the classroom is taught with regards to the capability of the majority, leaving the rest (1.8%) behind.  A classroom entailing a couple of ESL students, gives no right to lower the entire classroom’s expectations, therefore, all of the students have to work up to the professor’s hopes.  This situation leaves the ESL students in a considerably substantial ambush.
There is a certain presumption of all students to have prior knowledge in grammar, vocabulary, and sentence structure including a topic sentence, supporting details and conclusions. The lack of practice in these areas shows in their papers, causing administration to focus on their grammar and language rather than their context supporting their hypothesis. The professor doesn’t want to seem malicious, but rather helpful, wanting to prove a point and assist the student to the best of their ability.  The only problem is, the professor is incapable of servicing the student with their grammatical issues, when they should be focusing on the thesis of the paper.  The professor then relies on another type of assistance, more commonly known as the writing center, in helping the student with their grammatical errors.
ESL students have writing issues that can only be dealt with one-on-one consultations.  Professors not having the time or patience to do so, immediately throw them into the writing center.  Typically, the writing center are viewed as service to the teachers, which is entirely off.  The writing centers work hard to keep their reputation and are strict and disciplined in their tutoring skills, yet in teacher’s perspectives they are still viewed as paper fixer-uppers.  They are expected to do the dirty work for the teachers, which is exactly what they work so hard not to do.  Writing centers have been set up to help assist motivated writers to write and not to fix teacher’s papers to make it easier for them to grade.
Unfortunately, teachers have been misinformed and do not understand the philosophy behind their writing center’s motive and misuse their assistance.  The typical attitude of a professor toward a lack of higher writing skills is: “I’m not teaching you something you should have learned back in middle school, go to the writing center”.  This attitude is not only fallacious, but at the same time destroys both the writing center and the student.
The writing culture has portrayed their main focus on the mainstream student body, leaving the rest behind straggling to make it.  The stragglers are then sent to their last resort also known as the writing center, to help “fix” their grammatical issues in their writing habits.  Unfortunetly, the writing center is not created to fix or restore a student’s writing, their goal is to tutor and assist writers and not to hand them the “right answer”.
The Kean University’s writing center is a peer tutorial institution made up of collaborative techniques to assist the writer but not teach the writer. According to an article called, Coaching the Writing Process in the Kean University’s Online newspaper, the writing center is described as “the product of a long-term ambition to provide tutoring services in an area with interdisciplinary importance and personal development. Writers from the Kean University student body, faculty, and staff are welcome to utilize the writing center's tutoring sessions and resources.” (Nieves , 2010)
As an ESL writer, being thrown into a writing center, may not be the best possible answer for the student.  Typically the tutorial assistance available for these students is provided by writing centers, and most of the work available there is more commonly based on the work of an English native speaker.  Peer tutors attend to all students who walk in the door with proofreading and writing process questions, organizational and main focus inquiries, planning consultations, etc.  The main question here is, do these strategies appeal to the entire student body?  What about those who need assistance witht the simpler writing processes such as grammar and sentence structure?
Judith Powers writes an article on the different strategies needed to be held for the ESL writer.  “In responding to the three-fold increase in numbers of ESL conferences over the past two years, our writing center faculty has begun to question whether traditional collaborative strategies are appropriate and effective for second-language writers”(368).  The problem of not being fully equipped for the non-native speaking student evolves. “Unfortunately, many of the collaborative techniques that had been so successful with native-speaking writers appeared to fail (or work differently) when applied to ESL conferences” (369).


















Works Cited

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Powers, Judith. Rethinking Writing Center Conferencing
Strategies for the ESL Writer. 1993. 368-369. Print.